I was sad
I was lonely
It was then when I first met you.
When I needed a shoulder to cry on
You readily provided yours;
I needed a crutch to rest my wounded leg
You happily became one.
How was I to know...
How was I to know
That you walked
On an entirely different path
Although running parallel to mine,
It led to a different destination altogether.
I needed you in the beginning
You provided me with
Everything you had.
Now I want you to be mine
And I sadly realize,
That you can never be mine;
You have and will always belong
To that someone special in your heart.
I remain a mere acquaintance
In this journey you have embarked on.
To you...
I was one of a kind,
And yet unable to touch your heart.
To you...
I have always seemed
Childish, cute, immature.
To you...
I will always remain
The friend you chanced upon once.
But to me...
You have been a guiding light;
A regenerator of my dead spirit.
You have evoked in me the compassion
I had thought was gone forever.
You have shown me happiness,
You filled my life with colours,
Your single touch was warm enough,
To make my heart flutter...
I heave a sad sigh,
As I realize
How wrong it was on my part
To keep to myself, most selfishly,
The most precious friend ever!
-Me
20 comments:
WoW
if who ever u wrote this for dosent fall in love (with u)
then thers no hope for love ne more
but i love u for writing this serious nice work i bet i didnt look dumb reading it either
ne ways its nice knowing ur not angry
but i still want to see u getting angry
woof wooof woooooof woof woof wooof
btw mr brown says hi (i think he's saying that)(or he wants to eat u)
Thanks a lot puppy!
Really appreciate your actually going through this silly blog of mine :P
btw...could you explain what you meant by "i bet i didnt look dumb reading it either"
P.S. Hi Mr brown...I don't mind you eating me either :P
Your poetry is very simple yet it seems to carry a strong and profound meaning some thing which is virgin and comes from the heart untouched by any thing but love, its not like the rest of attention seekers or great intellects who try to make a point and get recognized. And I a small lil puppy dog just does not understand much of that factual stuff dealing with high society. I never understood why shaking spears could not string a few good words in the right order.
Hee hee thanks man...really appreciate it :)
ohk..marty nice!!!!
wel miss poetess dat ws a pretty emotional one....teri kahani to nai haina[:P]...anyway i think ke it cud hva been a teeny weeny betta..dnt know..missed element smwhere..its only my opinion thugh...
Hey thanks Vibhor....didn't know you visited my blog (sarcasm pours)
hey crys
well dats one awsm bit of pouring thots out on d paper
it is so naive with feelings so untouched
m amazd thou dat u r nt angry or even frustuated
hope i cud do dat too
---shubhi
hey mail me ur email add pls imp
verry imp
i ment to say marty :p
i ment to say marty :p
lovely one... reminds me of something i read long back...
"Kasoor na unka tha na humara,
Hum dono hi rishto ke rasm nibhate rahe...
Woh dosti ka ehsas jatate rahe,
Aur hum mohabbat ko dil mein chhupate rahe!!"
well written!!
Hey thanks shubhi!!!
Didn't know you would actually reply!!! Thanks a bunch!!!
Hey Sam...thanks a bunch for going through this naive little blog...
btw...do you mind telling where are those words from....I relate to them completely, you see :D
friendship...love....is urs alwys... just many times ones heart doesnt knw how to distinguish.....as they say let ur luv go if it cumz bak its urs..if not it never was...
crys uv alwys been a beautiful writer...i am reading ur work aftr blue.......n i have seen uv kept on tht passion in ur writing.... go on girl.....ur doin a gr8 job :)
Hey thanks aashi!!!!!!!!1
Love you for commenting!!! :D
i must say a perfect way to describe ur feelings!!!
im inspired sis!!!!!!
n u pen it down beautifully describing friendship in words is truly an art which u hv mastered!
this is the best of em all..........my personal favourite.......
Oh man!!! Thanks guys!!!
I am so proud of both of you ;)
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